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    {
        "test_id": "3692",
        "exam_id": "apihub",
        "exam_name": "ApiHub DM grading",
        "part_id": "4",
        "part_description": "",
        "baimau": "Music is a universal language that exists in various forms across the globe. While people have different preferences, music remains an essential part of human life for several reasons. Regarding the debate over whether traditional music holds more significance than international music, I believe both are equally important as they serve distinct but valuable purposes.\n \nFirst and foremost, humans need music primarily because of its profound impact on our mental well-being. Listening to music is a highly effective way to relieve stress and escape from the pressures of daily life. For example, relaxing to soothing melodies after a long day at work can significantly improve a person’s mood. Furthermore, music acts as a social glue that brings people together. Whether it is a national anthem sung at a sporting event or a popular dance track played at a party, music creates a strong sense of community and shared experience among individuals.\n \nWhen comparing traditional and international music, I would argue that neither is more important than the other. On the one hand, traditional music is vital for preserving a country’s cultural heritage. Folk songs and indigenous melodies carry the history, values, and language of a nation from one generation to the next. Without it, a country might gradually lose its unique cultural identity in a globalized world. On the other hand, international music, such as global pop, hip-hop, or EDM, plays a crucial role in connecting people across borders. It transcends language barriers and allows individuals from diverse backgrounds to enjoy the same artistic creations, fostering a sense of global unity.\n \nTo sum up, music fulfils several essential functions in human life, ranging from emotional release to social bonding. About the relative importance of traditional and international music, I do not believe either can be regarded as more significant than the other, since they contribute to society in fundamentally different ways: one safeguards cultural heritage, while the other promotes global connection.",
        "bai_lam_writing": "4345435 45 435 43 5 435 435 43 5 435 435 43 43 5 435 435 43 5 435 43 543 5 3453",
        "de_bai_luc_thi": "You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.\nPresent a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:\n \nThere are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?\n \nYou should write at least 250 words.\nUse your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.",
        "prompt": "As an experienced English teacher, your task is to:\n\n* Evaluate student writing assignments based on the provided rubric.\n* Provide a total score out of 10.\n* Offer constructive feedback based on the rubric and include suggestions for improvement.\n* Rewrite the student's essay into an improved version.\n\nWriting Assignment Marking Rubric (Out of 10 Points)\n\nTask Response (Content and Ideas):\n* Excellent (9-10 points): Rich ideas clearly presented; fully addresses the prompt.\n* Good (7-8 points): Good ideas that mostly address the prompt but may lack depth.\n* Satisfactory (5-6 points): Basic ideas present; partially addresses the prompt.\n* Needs Improvement (0-4 points): Lacks clear ideas; does not address the prompt.\n\nCoherence & Cohesion (Organization):\n* Excellent (9-10 points): Clear, logical structure with strong flow.\n* Good (7-8 points): Generally organized; minor issues with flow.\n* Satisfactory (5-6 points): Some organization; unclear transitions.\n* Needs Improvement (0-4 points): Disorganized and difficult to follow.\n\nLexical Resource (Language and Style):\n* Excellent (9-10 points): Engaging and varied language; appropriate tone.\n* Good (7-8 points): Generally clear language with some engaging elements.\n* Satisfactory (5-6 points): Basic language; tone may be inconsistent.\n* Needs Improvement (0-4 points): Limited language; inappropriate tone; may be confusing.\n\nGrammatical Range & Accuracy (Grammar and Mechanics):\n* Excellent (9-10 points): Few to no errors in spelling, grammar, or punctuation.\n* Good (7-8 points): Some errors, but they do not distract from the content.\n* Satisfactory (5-6 points): Several errors that may distract the reader.\n* Needs Improvement (0-4 points): Frequent errors that severely impact readability.\n\nPlease evaluate the student writing assignment below and score each of the four criteria according to the rubric above (each criterion is scored as a whole number from 0 to 10). Use simple language so the student can easily understand the feedback.\n\nCalculate the Overall Score as the average of the four criterion scores, then round it DOWN to the nearest 0.5 using this rule: if the decimal part is less than .5, round down to .0; if the decimal part is .5 or greater, round down to .5. For example: 7.8 becomes 7.5; 7.4 becomes 7.0; 8.2 becomes 8.0; 8.6 becomes 8.5. Write the Overall Score as a single number (do not write it as a fraction such as \"X/10\").\n\nA sample answer is provided below for reference. Use it only as a benchmark to help calibrate your scoring and feedback (e.g., what a strong response to this prompt looks like) — do not copy it into your feedback and do not penalize the student merely for writing differently from it.\n\nAfter scoring, rewrite the student's essay into an improved version. Keep the student's original ideas, structure, and voice — do not change the topic or add new content the student did not write. Fix grammar, vocabulary, and sentence structure issues, and improve flow and word choice where needed, so the result reads as a stronger version of the same essay.\n\nYour response must strictly follow this exact format. Use the exact criterion names below (do not translate, rename, or reword them). Write every score as a plain number only (e.g. \"6\"), never as \"6/10\". Put \"Feedback\" and \"Suggestion for improvement:\" each on their own new line:\n\nOverall Score:\n\n1. Task Response score:\nFeedback on Task Response:\nSuggestion for improvement:\n2. Coherence & Cohesion score:\nFeedback on Coherence & Cohesion:\nSuggestion for improvement:\n3. Lexical Resource score:\nFeedback on Lexical Resource:\nSuggestion for improvement:\n4. Grammatical Range & Accuracy score:\nFeedback on Grammatical Range & Accuracy:\nSuggestion for improvement:\n\nImproved Essay:\n\nWriting Assignment Prompt:\nYou should spend about 40 minutes on this task.\nPresent a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:\n \nThere are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?\n \nYou should write at least 250 words.\nUse your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.\n\nSample: Music is a universal language that exists in various forms across the globe. While people have different preferences, music remains an essential part of human life for several reasons. Regarding the debate over whether traditional music holds more significance than international music, I believe both are equally important as they serve distinct but valuable purposes.\n \nFirst and foremost, humans need music primarily because of its profound impact on our mental well-being. Listening to music is a highly effective way to relieve stress and escape from the pressures of daily life. For example, relaxing to soothing melodies after a long day at work can significantly improve a person’s mood. Furthermore, music acts as a social glue that brings people together. Whether it is a national anthem sung at a sporting event or a popular dance track played at a party, music creates a strong sense of community and shared experience among individuals.\n \nWhen comparing traditional and international music, I would argue that neither is more important than the other. On the one hand, traditional music is vital for preserving a country’s cultural heritage. Folk songs and indigenous melodies carry the history, values, and language of a nation from one generation to the next. Without it, a country might gradually lose its unique cultural identity in a globalized world. On the other hand, international music, such as global pop, hip-hop, or EDM, plays a crucial role in connecting people across borders. It transcends language barriers and allows individuals from diverse backgrounds to enjoy the same artistic creations, fostering a sense of global unity.\n \nTo sum up, music fulfils several essential functions in human life, ranging from emotional release to social bonding. About the relative importance of traditional and international music, I do not believe either can be regarded as more significant than the other, since they contribute to society in fundamentally different ways: one safeguards cultural heritage, while the other promotes global connection.\n\nHere is the student's essay:\n4345435 45 435 43 5 435 435 43 5 435 435 43 43 5 435 435 43 5 435 43 543 5 3453"
    }
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